- I think one might be able to eliminate illiteracy from the road. Only in very undeveloped countries might illiteracy still exist.
- I like how the people who tried to cross the river as a short cut are being swept away. The idea of a short cut must emulate bad practices and the results of that. I think that still holds true today.
- The many obstacles such as "Bad Habits" and "Weak Morals" and the creative way in which they are portrayed is funny. I wouldn't change those, maybe just the order in which they appear though.
- I don't think I would keep "Bad Memory" as a way off the road. Bad Memories/experiences can be overcome, and once overcome can be a great morale booster, a turbo in the car on the road to success.
- I would DEFINITELY keep "Lack of Preparation" there. That is a huge pitfall for so many people.
- I would change the icon of success at the top of the road to something else. If I could create a road for every person, their icon would be the thing they most wanted to succeed in or have.
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